To determine if each line in the paragraph contains extra words, we need to examine the sentence structure and grammar. Here’s a detailed analysis of each line:
Last month, I wrote to a few local television station asking if
- "station" should be plural ("stations") because "a few" implies more than one.
- Corrected: Last month, I wrote to a few local television stations asking if
they gave away the free tickets to any shows. A week later,
- "the" is extra because "free tickets" is generic and doesn't require a definite article.
- Corrected: they gave away free tickets to any shows. A week later,
they sent to me two tickets for a quiz show. I went with my
- "to" is extra because "sent me" is the correct phrasing.
- Corrected: they sent me two tickets for a quiz show. I went with my
best friend Angie last night. It was an excellent! The show
- "an" is extra because "excellent" is an adjective that needs a noun following it or should be used as "excellent show".
- Corrected: best friend Angie last night. It was excellent! The show
is called Know Them Or Not? and contestants have to
- This line is correct.
- Corrected: is called Know Them Or Not? and contestants have to
answer questions about a lots of different people in their lives,
- "a" is extra because "lots of" is the correct phrase.
- Corrected: answer questions about lots of different people in their lives,
like friends, relatives and colleagues. There are ten contestants
- This line is correct.
- Corrected: like friends, relatives and colleagues. There are ten contestants
to start with, but one of them gets knocked out at the end of
- This line is correct.
- Corrected: to start with, but one of them gets knocked out at the end of
each round. I’d like to go into on a show like that one day
- "into" is extra because "go on a show" is the correct phrase.
- Corrected: each round. I’d like to go on a show like that one day
but, for now, I’m much happy just to have been in the audience.
- "much" is extra because the correct phrase is "very happy."
- Corrected: but, for now, I’m very happy just to have been in the audience.
In summary, the extra words are:
- station
- the
- to
- an
- a
- into
- much