В приведённом тексте есть несколько пропусков, куда нужно вставить соответствующие слова, чтобы текст стал грамматически правильным и логически завершённым. Вот подробный разбор с пояснением:
Tourists may be interested in Moskov theatres (even those who don't know Russia), there are a lot of different performances.
- Заменим "Moskov" на Moscow, так как это правильное написание.
- Перед "Moscow theatres" добавим артикль the, так как речь идёт о конкретных театрах Москвы.
- Исправим "don't know Russia" на don’t know Russian, чтобы фраза имела смысл (даже те, кто не знает русского языка).
Исправленный фрагмент:
Tourists may be interested in the Moscow theatres (even those who don't know Russian), as there are a lot of different performances.
People who love animals can go to .Durov Animal Theatre and .Kuklachev Cat Theatre.
- Перед названиями театров нужно вставить артикль the, так как речь идёт о конкретных местах.
Исправленный фрагмент:
People who love animals can go to the Durov Animal Theatre and the Kuklachev Cat Theatre.
The first one was founded by .famous animal trainer Durov who was one of the Durov circus dynasty that was started in the late 19th century.
- Перед "famous animal trainer" нужно вставить артикль a, так как мы описываем человека (одного из представителей).
- Исправим "thainer" на trainer (опечатка).
Исправленный фрагмент:
The first one was founded by a famous animal trainer, Durov, who was one of the Durov circus dynasty that was started in the late 19th century.
Kuklachev, .circus clown, started his theatre to show what cats can do.
- Перед "circus clown" вставим артикль a, так как речь идёт о профессии человека.
Исправленный фрагмент:
Kuklachev, a circus clown, started his theatre to show what cats can do.
You will enjoy performance for adults at .Obraztsov Puppet Theatre.
- Перед "performance" добавим артикль a, так как речь идёт об одном из представлений.
- Перед "Obraztsov Puppet Theatre" вставим артикль the, так как это конкретное место.
Исправленный фрагмент:
You will enjoy a performance for adults at the Obraztsov Puppet Theatre.
They still show performances created by Sergei Obraztsov, .leader of the theatre from 1931 until his death.
- Перед "leader of the theatre" следует вставить артикль the, так как речь идёт о конкретной роли человека.
Исправленный фрагмент:
They still show performances created by Sergei Obraztsov, the leader of the theatre from 1931 until his death.
St Petersburg's ballet is famous all over the world. Many tourists try not to miss the chance to .Mariinsky Theatre.
- Перед "Mariinsky Theatre" добавим фразу visit the, чтобы предложение стало грамматически правильным.
Исправленный фрагмент:
St Petersburg's ballet is famous all over the world. Many tourists try not to miss the chance to visit the Mariinsky Theatre.
There are ballet performances at .Mussorgsky OPERA HOUSE and .Rimsky-Korsakov Conservatoire.
- Перед названиями театров вставим артикль the, так как речь идёт о конкретных местах.
- Исправим "OPERA HOUSE" на Opera House (используем корректный регистр).
Исправленный фрагмент:
There are ballet performances at the Mussorgsky Opera House and the Rimsky-Korsakov Conservatoire.
Wonderful music performances are offered by .October Concert Hall.
- Перед "October Concert Hall" добавим артикль the, так как речь идёт о конкретном месте.
- Исправим "offed" на offered (опечатка).
Исправленный фрагмент:
Wonderful music performances are offered by the October Concert Hall.
During the latest season orchestras conducted by Herbert Blomstedt and Seidji, .Famous foreign performers, played there.
- Перед "famous foreign performers" нужно убрать точку и добавить артикль the, так как речь идёт о конкретных людях.
- Исправим "archestras" на orchestras (опечатка).
- Исправим "Seidji" на Seiji (верное написание имени Seiji Ozawa).
Исправленный фрагмент:
During the latest season, orchestras conducted by Herbert Blomstedt and Seiji, the famous foreign performers, played there.
Полный исправленный текст:
Tourists may be interested in the Moscow theatres (even those who don't know Russian), as there are a lot of different performances. People who love animals can go to the Durov Animal Theatre and the Kuklachev Cat Theatre. The first one was founded by a famous animal trainer, Durov, who was one of the Durov circus dynasty that was started in the late 19th century. Kuklachev, a circus clown, started his theatre to show what cats can do. You will enjoy a performance for adults at the Obraztsov Puppet Theatre. They still show performances created by Sergei Obraztsov, the leader of the theatre from 1931 until his death.
St Petersburg's ballet is famous all over the world. Many tourists try not to miss the chance to visit the Mariinsky Theatre. There are ballet performances at the Mussorgsky Opera House and the Rimsky-Korsakov Conservatoire. Wonderful music performances are offered by the October Concert Hall. During the latest season, orchestras conducted by Herbert Blomstedt and Seiji, the famous foreign performers, played there.